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out of control, out of your mind
but i know who i am this time
nothing better than the freedom ahead
not about to keep hiding under the bed
i'm alive and ready- determined, steady
(i know, you're always gonna be this mean to me)
maybe, it seems, you just want to hold me back from this dream
but you won't control me, cos you're just another reason to scream

complex fragments of my past
hurtful memories i won't let last
this is where i find the words to say
i'm getting out, now i'm on my way

to a better place with a freer face
and the world in my hands, and my saving grace
and the masterplan, and this love, this man
the one to show acceptance of who i am

out of control, out of your mind
but i know who i am this time
nothing better than the freedom ahead
not about to keep hiding under the bed
i'm alive and ready- determined, steady
(i know, you're always gonna be this mean to me)
maybe, it seems, you just want to hold me back from this dream
but you won't control me, cos you're just another reason to scream

lying in those arms, secure in mind and heart
who knew the end would be where i could start?
no more hard times, no more hopeless crying
no more thinking, planning how i'm dying

onto a better place with a freer face
and the world in my hands, and my saving grace
and the masterplan, cos this love, this man
was the one to show acceptance of who i am

she's just out of control, out of her mind
i know it's my time to leave her behind
there's nothing better than the freedom ahead
i'm not about to keep hiding under the bed
i'm alive and ready- determined, and steady
(i know she'll always be this mean to me)
she just wants to hold me back from my dream
out of a sick, self-serving need to control me
(but she can't tear me apart at the seams)
when every violent episode is one more fading memory
and all she'll ever be is just another reason to scream
finding my way. 4/17/2012

edit. 11/7/13
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
now this worked out pretty well! :clap: I like the rhythm and how the whole song flows, I could clearly imagine the melody while reading
well done :) 
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X3beyondthesunx3 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013   Writer
thank you so much!
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my pleasure :iconbeauroseplz: 
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Kill3For3me Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the flow and the emotion behind the text. You are a really nice writer, but I would suggest working on your grammar. Other then that very nice song indeed!
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X3beyondthesunx3 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012   Writer
Ah, thank you! I appreciate the feedback :thanks:
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